Window shopping
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to pusan university for buying cloths.
My plan was just buy one blue jean.
But i bought one suit and brown long pant after looking around.
I like window shopping. I compared the prace with other shops.
I like my english tutor "kerry"
She has beautiful voice.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] I'm so curious who is Kerry ?
I'm so glad to see your message posted on board.
I hope you can do this more often.
I'll see you tomorrow in class.
Here is your composition:
Teacher Connie
I went to pusan university for buying cloths.
>> I went to Pusan University to buy clothes.My plan was just buy one blue jean.
>> My plan was to buy just one blue jeans.But i bought one suit and brown long pant after looking around.
>> But I bought one suit and a brown long pant after looking around.I like window shopping. I compared the prace with other shops.
>> I like window shopping. I want to compare the prices from different stores.I like my english tutor "kerry"
>> I like my english tutor named ?Kerry?
She has beautiful voice.
>> Correct
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