Winnie the Pooh and fault

2012-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

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AA Milne has taught childeren and parents many wonderful lessons through Winnie-the Pooh stories. Each of his characters is something childeren can identify with, related to and even learn something from. For example, Pooh teaches a positive attitude and how to recover predicament. While Eyore is pessimistic and goes well with other friends but always companies with them. It is a part that let us know very precious lesson. Tigger bounces about in the air with never ending enthusiasm for life. But he also shows how not thinking before doing something can get you into trouble. One of the Earth's most active fault lines, the North Anatolian Fault has caused 13 major earthquakes since 1939. It runs across the entire northern region of Turkey. One time, a rupture in August put stress on adjacent segments of the fault, triggering a quake three months later in November in eastern Turkey along with tremors in the west. What occurs in the future will depend on the state of the fault.

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Hi Sophia!!^-^ Thank you for your composition. You are very diligent. Keep it up! See you in class. ^-^ __Teacher Nica__   AA Milne has taught children and parents many wonderful lessons through Winnie-the Pooh stories. >> Correct! Each of his characters is something childeren can identify with, related to and even learn something from. >> Each of his character is something childeren can identify with, relate to and even learn something from. For example, Pooh teaches a positive attitude and how to recover predicament. >> Correct! While Eyore is pessimistic and goes well with other friends but always companies with them. >> While Eyore is pessimistic and goes well with other friends but always accompanies them. It is a part that let us know very precious lesson. >> It always teaches us very precious lessons. Tigger bounces about in the air with never ending enthusiasm for life. >> Tiger bounces in the air with never ending enthusiasm for life. But he also shows how not thinking before doing something can get you into trouble. >> But also shows how to think before doing something that can get you into trouble. One of the Earth\'s most active fault lines, the North Anatolian Fault has caused 13 major earthquakes since 1939. >> Correct! It runs across the entire northern region of Turkey. >> Correct! One time, a rupture in August put stress on adjacent segments of the fault, triggering a quake three months later in November in eastern Turkey along with tremors in the west. >> Correct! What occurs in the future will depend on the state of the fault. >> Correct!

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