winter and summer
학생이 쓴 원문
I think winter is more difficult than summer. Summer is just hot and rainy, but winter is thick so it\'s uncomfortable to move, and the roads are freezing, so it\'s dangerous and cold. There is also a high chance of catching a cold.
강사 첨삭
I think winter is more difficult than summer.
>> CORRECT
Summer is just hot and rainy, but winter is thick so it\'s uncomfortable to move, and the roads are freezing, so it\'s dangerous and cold.
>> Summer is just hot and rainy, but in winter we wear thick clothes, which makes it uncomfortable to move. The roads are also icy, so it’s dangerous and cold.
There is also a high chance of catching a cold.
>> CORRECT
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