Winter hoilday

2016-01-26 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I like winter hoilday because I don't go to school and get to play at my house. but being to lazy and just play and eat and not having a exercise will make you fat. In some sides i don't like hoilday because I've got lots of home work so i don't like it. If there is a snow I can ride sleigh and it will be fun. I don't hope that hoilday won't finish to fast.

강사 첨삭

Hi MIN! Happy Monday!:)   Well, holidays are okay but it\'s different here in my country. We don\'t have winter so we\'ll never get to play in the snow. You are right, you have to exercise, you have to move so you won\'t gain weight on holidays.^_^ See you in class.   ~T. Mayleen   I like winter hoilday because I don\'t go to school and get to play at my house. >> I like the winter holiday because I won\'t have to go to school and I get to play at home. but being to lazy and just play and eat and not having a exercise will make you fat. >> But being lazy and not having exercise will make you fat. In some sides i don\'t like hoilday because I\'ve got lots of home work so i don\'t like it. >> On a bad note, I don\'t like holidays because I got lots of homework to do. If there is a snow I can ride sleigh and it will be fun. >> If there is snow, I\'d ride a sleigh and it\'ll be fun. I don\'t hope that hoilday won\'t finish to fast. >> I\'m not hoping for the holiday to end.

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