Winter Vacation
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It seems like you have a lot of things to do this winter vacation.
I hope you enjoy it a lot.
Share about your plans this winter vacation on our next class.
I\'ll appreciate that. ^^
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Winter Vacation is come.
>> Finally, it\'s my winter vacation.
I will go skating myself and I will go skiing with my dad.
>> I will go skating by myself and go skiing with my dad.
Also,I will go to the market with my classmate Jihun and eat a lot.
>> I will also go to the market with my classmate Jihun and we will eat a lot.
And I will go to the library with my mom too.
>> Correct
>> Or: I will go to the library with my mom as well.
This Winter Vacation is my last elementary school vacation.It will be awesome.
>> This winter vacation is my last elementary school vacation and it will be awesome!
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