wish
학생이 쓴 원문
My first wish is meet my elementary school friends. Second wish is travel with my family.
Last wish is I go to Everland with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ha [이름]!^^
Here are my three wishes:
1. Win the lottery
2. I wish I can go to Korea
3. I wish to have a baby.
Teacher Andrea
My first wish is meet my elementary school friends.
>> My first wish is to meet my elementary school friends.
Second wish is travel with my family.
>> My second wish is to travel with my family.
>> My second wish is to travel with my family.
Last wish is I go to Everland with my friends.
>> Lastly, I wish I can go to Everland with my friends.
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