Wish
학생이 쓴 원문
I wish people understood that I care more than I show.
I don’t always express my feelings well.
Sometimes I seem quiet, but I’m still paying attention.
I try my best even when it doesn’t look like it.
I just want people to know my intentions are good.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jenny,
Your message was so sweet, and you expressed your feelings beautifully. I’m really proud of you. Not everyone can say their feelings so clearly, but you did it in a simple and honest way, that shows courage.
I like how you explained that you care even if you don’t always show it. That’s okay. Many people are like that, and it doesn’t mean your heart is any less kind. Even when you’re quiet, you’re still thinking, listening, and trying your best, and that is something to be proud of.
You have such a good heart, Jenny. Your intentions are kind, and your writing shows that. Keep sharing your thoughts like this. I’m always happy to read anything you write.
~Teacher Cathy
I wish people understood that I care more than I show.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I wish people realized that I care more than it seems.
I don’t always express my feelings well.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I don’t always communicate my feelings clearly.
Sometimes I seem quiet, but I’m still paying attention.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I may seem quiet sometimes, but I’m always listening.
I try my best even when it doesn’t look like it.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I’m trying my best, even if it doesn’t always show.
I just want people to know my intentions are good.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I just hope people understand that my intentions are good.
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