wish us good luck

Dear [이름]!!

I hope everything goes  well tomorrow!! You can do it!!

~Teacher Megan~

HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS:

Our team leader and her assistant manager is leaving on business trip to China yesterday.

>>> Our team leader and her assistant manager left for a business trip to China yesterday.

 it would be very tough trip because they\'ll transfer two times and wait for at least 6 hours for each transfer.

>>>  it would be very tough trip because they\'ll be transferred two times and have to wait for at least 6 hours for each transfer.

Lastly they would arrived at 1:30 am in hotel if Chinese airplane, is very often delayed , will be on time at Urumqu airport.

>>> Lastly they would arrived at 1:30 am in a hotel, if Chinese airplane is very often delayed or will be on time at Urumqu airport.

I just hope them good luck, there will be no delay and get back safely during their trip.

>>> I just wished them good luck, hoping that there will be no delay and they\'d get back safely during their trip.

However, another battle also happened in our office.

>>> Correct.

we arranged the next shipment to import chemicals Korea, but the port is being closed as severe winds blow.

>>> we arranged the next shipment to import chemicals in Korea, but the port is being closed as the severe winds blow.

Our shipment agency expected that winds will be blowing by the 20th.

>>> Our shipment agency expected that winds will be blowing until the 20th.

Then we pay for a large amount of demurrages, which may be almost double of original shipment fee. we can\'t wait for a long time.

>>> Correct.

Tomorrow is the only chance that we\'ll be able to reach and ship our product, because the weather will be clear for a little while.

>>> Correct.

For now, I wish me good luck, either.

>>> Correct.