Wishes
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Jay,
I hope all your wishes come true. Let me check if the genie is available.(\",)
~Lynn
It would be wonderful, and I\'d like to tell you my three wishes.
>> It would be wonderful so I\'d like to tell you my three wishes.
First, I want to be rich so that I can enjoy what I want to enjoy without any worries.
>> correct!
Second, I hope all people who related with me or close to me live healthily.
>> Second, I hope all people who are related or close to me will live healthily.
In the past, I don\'t know the importance of the health, but these days I\'ve been feeling that nothing is more important than health.
>> In the past, I didn\'t know the importance of health, but these days I\'ve realized that nothing is more important than health.
Finally, I want a genius brain so that I can remember everything I want.
>> Finally, I want to be a genius so that I can remember everything I want.
If I can achieve these three wishes, it cannot be happier than this.
>> If I can achieve these three wishes, I\'ll be the happiest person alive.
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