Wishes

2019-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

It would be wonderful, and I\'d like to tell you my three wishes. First, I want to be a rich so that I can enjoy what I want to enjoy without any worries. Second, I hope all people who related with me or close to me live healthily. In the past, I don\'t know the importance of the health, but these days I\'ve been feeling that nothing is more important than health. Finally, I want a genius brain so that I can remember everything I want. If I can achieve these three wishes, it cannot be happier than this.

강사 첨삭

Jay,

I hope all your wishes come true. Let me check if the genie is available.(\",)

~Lynn

It would be wonderful, and I\'d like to tell you my three wishes.

>> It would be wonderful so I\'d like to tell you my three wishes.

First, I want to be rich so that I can enjoy what I want to enjoy without any worries.

>> correct!

Second, I hope all people who related with me or close to me live healthily.

>> Second, I hope all people who are related or close to me will live healthily.

 In the past, I don\'t know the importance of the health, but these days I\'ve been feeling that nothing is more important than health.

>> In the past, I didn\'t know the importance of  health, but these days I\'ve realized that nothing is more important than health.

Finally, I want a genius brain so that I can remember everything I want.

>> Finally, I want to be a genius so that I can remember everything I want.

 If I can achieve these three wishes, it cannot be happier than this.

>>  If I can achieve these three wishes, I\'ll be the happiest person alive.

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