With an increase in the number of privately owned vehicles, roads are becoming more congested. What
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With an increase in the number of privately owned vehicles, roads are becoming more congested. What measures could both government and individuals take to deal with this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Most of people have two car in a holdhouse becaue of more double income couple.
To reduce traffic jam, each compnay and public institutions are being implemented a double shift.
For example, if their car number is in odd number that they can drive a car. But this is not mandatory.
I think that we should try to take their car when they really need them.
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[이름], thank you for taking some time to give your opinion about this issue. ^^
T. Irene
Most of people have two car in a holdhouse becaue of more double income couple.
>>> Most couples have their own car because they work separately from each other.
To reduce traffic jam, each compnay and public institutions are being implemented a double shift.
To reduce traffic jam, each compnay and public institutions are being implemented a double shift.
>>> To reduce traffic jams, companies and public institutions have implemented the double shift system.
For example, if their car number is in odd number that they can drive a car. But this is not mandatory.
For example, if their car number is in odd number that they can drive a car. But this is not mandatory.
>>> It works like this, cars are classified as odd or even according to the last number in their registration number. This is not mandatory however.
I think that we should try to take their car when they really need them.
I think that we should try to take their car when they really need them.
>>> My opinion is that, people should only take our their cars when they are sure to use them.
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