With corona life before
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In Korea, we started with corona virus life at november.
Before with corona life, our government proposed law is locked down store and restaurants or some every public places.
I think it would be worked.
Real case infected people down gonna good way and to find stability.
But when we start with corona life, locked down is off now our infect people number going high everyday I\'m very worried about it.
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Hi Ann:)
I noticed that too. :( Even my students nowadays are not feeling well. All of them are worried that they might have COVID-19.
In Korea, we started with corona virus life at november.
>> In Korea, we started living with COVID-19 since November this year.
Before with corona life, our government proposed law is locked down store and restaurants or some every public places.
>> Before this kind of living, our government proposed laws about lock downs of all public places.
I think it would be worked.
>> I think this will work.
Real case infected people down gonna good way and to find stability.
>> The number of cases will go down and everyone will have stability.
But when we start with corona life, locked down is off now our infect people number going high everyday I\'m very worried about it.
>> But ever since we started living with the virus, the number of cases kept on increasing so I am very worried about it.
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