with family

2020-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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I usually take a walk with family they actually have no hobby I just enjoy myself sometimes we watch the movies or go to dinner outside I was used it

강사 첨삭

Hi Mrs. [Name]. Thank you very much for taking your time in answering your homework. It is much appreciated. Keep up the good work. 

Here are your corrections:

I usually take a walk with family
>> I usually take a walk with my family.

they actually have no hobby
>> They don\'t have any hobby.

I just enjoy myself sometimes we watch the movies or go to dinner outside
>> 
I just enjoy my time watching movies or eating dinner outside.

I was used it
>> I am used it. or That is what I am used to doing.

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