with foreigner..1
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I have two foreign friends. One is my ex-coworker and the other is my now-coworker. We are close enough to have a drink after working or on weekends. Actually, When I have a chance to meet foreigner, I always try to get close. Of course they are so helpful to develop my English skills, but the main reason is the pure curiosity about foreigners. My ex-coworker is a good man. He is smart. He is interested in many things and has some knowledge on lots of themes. So whatever we talk, we can enjoy the conversation itself. Also, for six month, we've helped to study each other language and it is very useful to me.
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Hi!! It's really nice to know that you're really confident in meeting and making friends with foreigners. And you're right being with foreigners would definitely help you in enhancing your speaking and listening skill. Just keep it up!! Talk to you [이름]n then.
I have two foreign friends.
>> Correct
One is my ex-coworker and the other is my now-coworker.
>> One was my former co-worker and the other is my current co-worker.
We are close enough to have a drink after working or on weekends.
>> We are close enough to have drink after work or even during weekends.
Actually, When I have a chance to meet foreigner, I always try to get close.
>> Actually, when I have a chance to meet foreigners, I always try to be close to them.
Of course they are so helpful to develop my English skills, but the main reason is the pure curiosity about foreigners.
>>CORRECT
My ex-coworker is a good man. He is smart. He is interested in many things and has some knowledge on lots of themes.
>> My former co-worker is a good man. He is smart. He is interested in many things and has some knowledge on lots of them.
So whatever we talk, we can enjoy the conversation itself.
>> Correct
Also, for six month, we've helped to study each other language and it is very useful to me.
>> Also, for six months, we've helped each other to study about other languages and it is very useful for me.
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