with foreigner..2
학생이 쓴 원문
But I have one concern. Of course, Whenever we have an appointment, I am looking forward to seeing him. But plus, I always get the pressure about the language. When I want to meet him and just drink one beer to relax my whole tough day, it is almost impossible. The language sometimes bothered me. Meeting him, I need to make English sentences think complexed grammar, idioms. It makes me very crazy.
Tonight, I have an appointment with my present foreign coworker. Of course, I am looking forward to having nice time. But anyway it is true I can not help thinking of the language pressure.
강사 첨삭
Hello again Ms. [Name],
Keep this compos coming! Dont[apostraphe] hesitate to ask question, arayte? Catch you [이름]n.
But I have one concern.
>>CORRECT
Of course, Whenever we have an appointment, I am looking forward to seeing him.
>>Of course, whenever we have an appoitment, I always look forward to seeing him.
But plus, I always get the pressure about the language.
>>On the other hand, I always get the pressure on the language barrier.
When I want to meet him and just drink one beer to relax my whole tough day, it is almost impossible.
>>When I want to meet him and just drink one beer [or grab a beer] to relax my tough day, it is almost impossible.
The language sometimes bothered me.
>>The language (language barrier?) sometimes bother me.
Meeting him, I need to make English sentences think complexed grammar, idioms.
It makes me very crazy.
>>When I meet him, I feel the pressure of making English sentences using complex grammar and idioms. It makes me very crazy. Tonight, I have an appointment with my present foreign coworker.
>>Tonight, I have an appointment with my current foreign coworker.
Of course, I am looking forward to having nice time.
>>CORRECT
But anyway it is true I can not help thinking of the language pressure.
>>But anyway, it is true I cannot help but be pressured with the language barrier.
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