With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly.

I agree that nowadays students can learn something more quickly, however I don't agree that they can learn more information. Most of all, Attribute to development of technology, we can find a lot of information very easily. However with the help of technology, we don't need to remember all. So we search the same thing through the smartphone very often. We just read it and turn a deaf ear to the information. So nowadays students can learn something more information, but they don't remember it. It means they can't learn it more quickly. That's the reason why I disagree that with the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly.

Hi there [이름]! ^^ Such a wonderfully written essay; very insightful indeed. ^^ Most of the corrections are rephrasing to help with the ease of elocution and just a simple reminder, \"most of all\" is usually placed at the end of an opinion to emphasize a point. If you\'d like to start with your point at the beginning, \"first and foremost\" is the best synonym for this expression. ^^   See you in class! ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==       I agree that nowadays students can learn something more quickly, however I don\'t agree that they can learn more information.>> CORRECT Most of all, Attribute to development of technology, we can find a lot of information very easily.  >> First and foremost, we can attribute the ease of finding information to the development of technology.   However with the help of technology, we don\'t need to remember all.   >> However, with the help of technology, we don\'t see the significance of remembering.   So we search the same thing through the smartphone very often. We just read it and turn a deaf ear to the information. >> That is why we often search about the same information in our smartphones and simply reading it and turning a deaf ear to it.   So nowadays students can learn something more information, but they don\'t remember it. It means they can\'t learn it more quickly. >>Therefore, nowadays, student\'s can learn more information but since they don\'t remember it, they don\'t learn efficiently. That\'s the reason why I disagree that with the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. >> CORRECT