Without music, life would be a mistake. - Friedrich Nietzsche. Do you agree? Why? Why not?
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Hi there Mr. [이름]^^
Thanks for having the class today and doing your homework.
I also don\'t think that without music, life would be a mistake. I strongly disagree with this!
But I really like music. I especially love classical music.
I think you should try listening to it ^^
Without music, life would be a mistake. - Friedrich Nietzsche. Do you agree? Why? Why not?
I don\'t agree with that.
>>CORRECT!
OR: I disagree with it.
In my life, there is no music.
>>CORRECT!
OR: There is no music in my life.
So, what is my life?
>>CORRECT!
Is my life a mistake?
>>CORRECT!
I don\'t thing so.
>>I don\'t think so.
My life is meaningful in its own way, and I live a happy life.
>>CORRECT!
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