Without music, life would be a mistake. - Friedrich Nietzsche. Do you agree? Why? Why not?

2019-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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I don't agree with that. In my life, there is no music. So, what is my life? Is my life a mistake? I don't thing so. My life is meaningful in its own way, and I live a happy life.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Mr. [이름]^^

Thanks for having the class today and doing your homework.

I also don\'t think that without music, life would be a mistake. I strongly disagree with this!

But I really like music. I especially love classical music.

I think you should try listening to it ^^


Without music, life would be a mistake. - Friedrich Nietzsche. Do you agree? Why? Why not?


I don\'t agree with that.

>>CORRECT!

OR: I disagree with it.
In my life, there is no music.

>>CORRECT!

OR: There is no music in my life.

So, what is my life?

>>CORRECT!
Is my life a mistake?

>>CORRECT!

 I don\'t thing so.

>>I don\'t think so.
 My life is meaningful in its own way, and I live a happy life.

>>CORRECT!


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