Without plastic!

2023-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

학생이 쓴 원문

Without plastic, the world would stop. Many people will be confused and uncomfortable with not using plastic. The environment won’t seem to get any better. People are likely to find or create alternatives to plastic. It seems that the use of paper may increase rapidly.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


Without plastic, the world would stop. 
>>> CORRECT!

Many people will be confused and uncomfortable with not using plastic. 
>>> CORRECT!

The environment won’t seem to get any better. 
>>> CORRECT!

People are likely to find or create alternatives to plastic. 
>>> CORRECT!

It seems that the use of paper may increase rapidly.
>>> CORRECT!

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