Without rules in my life. everybody could go forward.

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If there were no rules in my life. I think in this case, I need to organize what rules to my life.

>> If there were no rules in my life,  I think I need to organize the rules that may apply to me.

Saying politely. Staying humble. Keepping chasing my goal. Keeping my daily routine. Getting fit. Not eat too much.

>> These rules include speaking politely, staying humble, chasing my goal, keeping my daily routine, getting fit, and not eating too much.

There are so many rules I’d defined. Without any of that.

>> There are so many rules I’d defined, without any of that.

Firstly, I will not doing anything at all.

>> Firstly, I will not do anything at all.

So I will try to feel the best leisure time in the world.

>> I will try to enjoy the best leisure activities in the world.

will it be like heaven?

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Really comfortable?

>> Would it feel comfortable?

And next, I will do something unusual that could be criminal but not actual crime making my hear pounded or beaten.

>> Next, I will do something heart-pounding and unusual that may seem like a crime but isn\'t actually criminal.

I am not sure what is would be but I wanna try.

>> I am not sure what it would be but I want to give it a try.

And also I wish I could my weakness to everyone without any hesitation.

>> Also, I wish I could overcome my weakness in front of everyone without any hesitation.

Everybody has their own weakness in their heart, so do i.

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I can imagine how it would feel when I say my weakness to everybody without conservancy. Thank you.

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