Wives still do more housework than husbands: report
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1. How do you feel about this news?
I think this is reasonable change because the time is change than before days.
>> I think this is a reasonable change. Because, the time has changed than before.
Many years ago, it is natural that man usually make money and woman care household.
>> It is natural that the man usually makes money and the woman takes care of the household many years ago.
This traditional notion have been changed because there are many woman who make money like man.
>> This traditional notion have been changed. Because, there are a lot of women who makes money like men.
2. Which household chore do you hate doing the most? Why?
Nothing special which I can select.
>> CORRECT
However, I don\'t like washing dishes because this make me unavoidable to put a water on my hand anyway.
>> However, I don\'t like washing the dishes. Because, this will make me put my hand in the water.
3. How does your family decide who does various chores around the house?
Definitely my wife. My wife make all commands to me anything she can\'t do.
>> CORRECT
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