woke up late.

2010-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, jenny^ ^ This morning, I woke up at 6:06. I was late! I had to drag myself at least 6 AM. I Knew I would have to catch the bus, I was in a hurry. but when I finished for work. It was 6:23 AM. It was impossible to reach at bus station within 4 minutes. so i gave up to catch the bus. instead of that I called to my co-worker who lives near my home. if he departed i had to ask to my mom taking me at my work. fortunately, my co-workder answered my call. and he dropped by my home. so I could come to my office in time.

강사 첨삭

[이름], Whoa! That was really a close call! Anyway, I am so happy that you were able to make it on time. Thanks to your colleague. I feel glad everytime I read your composition especially if they are your daily experiences. Because of these compositions, I get to know you more and you learn how to express your ideas in English as well. I say, you are doing a good job and you should keep it up! ^^   XOXO, Jenny     Good morning, Jenny.^ ^This morning, I woke up at 6:06. I was late! I had to drag myself at least 6 AM. I Knew I would have to catch the bus, I was in a hurry. but when I finished for work. >>>I had to drag my self out of the bed before 6am. I knew I have to catch the bus. I was in a hurry. After I got set up(ready),it was 6:23 am.    It was impossible to reach at bus station within 4 minutes. so i gave up to catch the bus. instead of that I called to my co-worker who lives near my home. >> It was impossible for me to reach the bus station within 4 minutes. Instead, I called up my colleague who lives near my home.    if he departed i had to ask to my mom taking me at my work. fortunately, my co-workder answered my call. and he dropped by my home. so I could come to my office in time. >> If he had left, I have had to ask my mom to take me to work. Luckily, my colleague answered my call. He picked me up and we arrived in the office on time.

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