women have a strength in their weakness.

2019-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

What comes to mind when you hear the word ‘women’? The word \"women\" means a lot. Until women\'s social status improves steadily, It has made me feel weakness, dependent on men. But now it is as independent existence. It is no longer regarded as women dependent on men. when we heard \"women\", we can feel strong in softness. women is beautiful and soft but they have great strength. Also they aren\'t turned over men in abilities. I think women is great :) Hi, Teacher ♥ I think it was a little hard topic to express my opinion. But I know we need to think about it. :) I hope we can grow up as better society people ! It already seems to be enough ! haha ^_^ See you a little bit later. ~~ Bye ~~

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your opinion by submitting your answer to me. 
I think that the word \'women\' is also great. ^^

Anyway, have a good night and see you on Thursday! 

~Teacher Gina

What comes to mind when you hear the word ‘women’?

The word \"women\" means a lot. 
>> CORRECT.
Until women\'s social status improves steadily, It has made me feel weakness, dependent on men.
>> Until women\'s social status improved steadily, it has made me feel  the weakness and dependence on men.


But now it is as independent existence. 
>> CORRECT.
It is no longer regarded as women dependent on men. 
>> Women are no longer regarded as those who are dependent on men.
when we heard \"women\", we can feel strong in softness.
>> When we hear \"women\", we can feel their strength despite of being soft.
women is beautiful and soft but they have great strength. 
>> Women are beautiful and soft but they have great strength. 
Also they aren\'t turned over men in abilities.
>> Also, they aren\'t overturned by men when it comes to abilities.
I think women is great :)
>> I think the word \'women\' is great. 
>> Or: I think women are great.


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