Women's day ?

2011-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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I read some articles in magazine today. I don't like reading things such as books or newspaper. However, I couldn't take my eyes off it published on 'Women's day'. There are women cleaning universities and they are on strike for better wages. I know their works aren't easy at all. What annoys me is the actions of the schools. They don't give them normal condition places to take a rest. The women are allowed to get places like under dirty stairs or next to a toilet while working, but even there is hardly a short rest time and they receive the lowest paying. They are innocent so the terrible schools treat them like that. I have seen them easily during school days. They usually greeted me first so kindly. I'm regreting not having responded to them more politely.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I think that issue is common in every universities, even here. It is really sad to know that they have the hardest jobs but because people think it’s a dirty job so they only get meager pay. I hope the universities will do something about it. -Tiny^0^ I read some articles in magazine today. >> I read some articles in a magazine today. I don't like reading things such as books or newspaper. >>correctHowever, I couldn't take my eyes off it published on 'Women's day'. >> However, I couldn't take my eyes off its published on 'Women's day'. There are women cleaning universities and they are on strike for better wages. >>correctI know their works aren't easy at all. >>correctWhat annoys me is the actions of the schools. >>correctThey don't give them normal condition places to take a rest. >>correctThe women are allowed to get places like under dirty stairs or next to a toilet while working, but even there is hardly a short rest time and they receive the lowest paying. >> The women are allowed to get places like under dirty stairs or next to a toilet while working, but even there, they hardly have a short rest and they receive the lowest pay. They are innocent so the terrible schools treat them like that. >>correctI have seen them easily during school days. >>correctThey usually greeted me first so kindly. >> They usually greet me first so kindly. I'm regreting not having responded to them more politely. >> I'm regretting not having responded to them more politely. >>spelling check: regretting

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