Women's day ?
학생이 쓴 원문
I read some articles in magazine today.
I don't like reading things such as books or newspaper.
However, I couldn't take my eyes off it published on 'Women's day'.
There are women cleaning universities and they are on strike for better wages.
I know their works aren't easy at all.
What annoys me is the actions of the schools.
They don't give them normal condition places to take a rest.
The women are allowed to get places like under dirty stairs or next to a toilet while working, but even there is hardly a short rest time and they receive the lowest paying.
They are innocent so the terrible schools treat them like that.
I have seen them easily during school days.
They usually greeted me first so kindly.
I'm regreting not having responded to them more politely.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I think that issue is common in every universities, even here.
It is really sad to know that they have the hardest jobs but because people think it’s a dirty job so they only get meager pay.
I hope the universities will do something about it.
-Tiny^0^
I read some articles in magazine today.
>> I read some articles in a magazine today.
I don't like reading things such as books or newspaper.
>>correctHowever, I couldn't take my eyes off it published on 'Women's day'.
>> However, I couldn't take my eyes off its published on 'Women's day'.
There are women cleaning universities and they are on strike for better wages.
>>correctI know their works aren't easy at all.
>>correctWhat annoys me is the actions of the schools.
>>correctThey don't give them normal condition places to take a rest.
>>correctThe women are allowed to get places like under dirty stairs or next to a toilet while working, but even there is hardly a short rest time and they receive the lowest paying.
>> The women are allowed to get places like under dirty stairs or next to a toilet while working, but even there, they hardly have a short rest and they receive the lowest pay.
They are innocent so the terrible schools treat them like that.
>>correctI have seen them easily during school days.
>>correctThey usually greeted me first so kindly.
>> They usually greet me first so kindly.
I'm regreting not having responded to them more politely.
>> I'm regretting not having responded to them more politely.
>>spelling check: regretting
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