Women should be allowed to go topless in public

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I think women deserve the same freedoms as men.

>> I think women deserve the same freedom as men do.

but I do not understand why women want to go topless in public.

>> However, I do not understand why women want to go topless in public.

>> OR: However, I don\'t understand why they want to go topless in public.

>> OR: I think women deserve the same freedom as men do, but I don\'t understand why they want to go topless in public.

I really would like to know how many percentage people agree about that.

>> I really would like to know how many percentage of people agree about that.

I heard that some beach in the would are naked beach, and it is not weird if I were there.

>> I heard that some beaches in the world are called nude beaches, and it is not weird if I\'m there.

>> OR: I heard that some beaches in the world are called nude beaches, and it\'s not weird if I\'m there.

>> OR: I heard that some beaches in the world are called nude beaches, and it isn\'t weird if I\'m there.

>> OR: I heard that some beaches in the world are called nude beaches, and it wouldn\'t be weird if I was there.

but I am sure most men took a people\'s body with their camera.

>> However, I am sure most men take people\'s bodies with their cameras.

>> OR: However, I\'m sure most men take people\'s bodies with their cameras.

>> OR: I heard that some beaches in the world are called nude beaches, and it wouldn\'t be weird if I was there, but I\'m sure most men take people\'s bodies with their cameras.

I think women are not goods for selling.

>> CORRECT!

If it is allowed to go topless in public for women, many people watched them like toys or dolls.

>> If it is allowed to go topless in public for women, many people will watch them like toys or dolls.

>> OR: If it is allowed for women to go topless in public, many people will watch them like toys or dolls.

>> OR: If women are allowed to go topless in public, many people will watch them like toys or dolls.

I disagree that women should be allowed to go topless in public.

>> CORRECT!