women soccer game

Hello I watched Asian game on tv on saturday night Korean team and North Korean team played a match Our country separated South Korea(ROK) and North Korea(DOK) North Korea is communism I was not good playing a match as the same people each other Our team(South Korea) cheering me is losed 1 to 3 Monday I will take phone same number

Hello Mr. [Name]! Thank you for your composition! It's good to know that you did something fun last weekend. You really deserve to have some fun at least once a week. You can also write a composition for me so that you can practice more on writing in English. Below are my corrections for your composition. Have a nice day! T. Jane ^^ Hello >> Hello! (Please don't forget to put a punctuation mark.)I watched Asian game on tv on saturday night >> correct but please capitalize the first letter of proper nouns and don't forget to put a punctuation mark at the end of each sentence)Korean team and North Korean team played a match >> The South Korean team and the North Korean team had a match.Our country separated South Korea(ROK) and North Korea(DOK) >> Our country is separated into South Korea (ROK) and North Korea (DOK).North Korea is communism >> correct (Put period [.] at the end of the sentence.)I was not good playing a match as the same people each other >> I am not as good as other people in a match.Our team(South Korea) cheering me is losed 1 to 3>> Our team which I was cheering for lost with a score of 1 to 3.Monday I will take phone same number >> On Monday, I will use the same phone number.