Wonju
학생이 쓴 원문
Wonju is the biggest city in Gangwon province, so all the unique dishes are gathered. Among them, dumplings and loach soups are very popular. The city holds dumpling festival annually and the size of festival is getting larger. In the festival, visitors can see and enjoy about 100 kinds of dumplings. While visitors like to enjoy dumplings, local people love to enjoy loach soups. Actually I haven\'t eaten any dumplings or loach soups because most dumplings have some pork in themselves and I am not familiar with loach soups.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Gi [이름]!
Every day I’m learning something new about Korean culture and food, and that’s thanks to you. It’s nice to know that there’s a wide variety of dumplings in Wonju, because I only knew about pork and vegetable ones since they’re the most common.
- T. Caitlyn
Wonju is the biggest city in Gangwon province, so all the unique dishes are gathered.
>> CORRECT
Among them, dumplings and loach soups are very popular.
>> CORRECT
The city holds dumpling festival annually and the size of festival is getting larger.
>> The city holds a dumpling festival annually, and the size of the festival is getting larger.
In the festival, visitors can see and enjoy about 100 kinds of dumplings.
>> CORRECT
While visitors like to enjoy dumplings, local people love to enjoy loach soups.
>> CORRECT
Actually I haven\'t eaten any dumplings or loach soups because most dumplings have some pork in themselves and I am not familiar with loach soups.
>> Actually, I haven’t eaten any dumplings or loach soup because most dumplings contain pork, and I’m not familiar with loach soup.
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