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1. What is the most important thing in your life right now? What is your priority? The most important thing that job of future in my life right now. To make a success of my job which is cabin crew, I have doing some prepare like study in English and on diet and also swimming. Sometimes such things are burden to me but I believe that if I should endure and I could be a great flight attendant. For example, If I don't want flight attendant I won't learn swimming and also I couldn't speak English not at all. So I am happy because of my great future. See you soon, my beatiful teacher.

Hi there most beautiful [이름]!! It is okay, I am still very glad that you re-enrolled again and you did your homework for today! ^^, I deeply apreciate it. Here are my corrections, please do practice on them. ^^, I will talk to you again tomorrow!

~ T. Christine >_<
The most important thing that job of future in my life right now.

>> The most important thing for me now is to be able to have a good job for my future.

OR >> My most important goal now is to land a job that can provide a good future for me.
To make a success of my job which is cabin crew, I have doing some prepare like study in English and on diet and also swimming.
>> For me to be successful as a cabin crew member, I have been doing a lot of preparations like studying English, going on a diet and also swimming.

Sometimes such things are burden to me but I believe that if I should endure and I could be a great flight attendant.
>> Sometimes, I feel burdened by these things but I believe that if I will persevere, I can eventually become a great flight attendant.

For example, If I don't want flight attendant I won't learn swimming and also I couldn't speak English not at all.
>> This is why I am dedicated to losing my weight so I can attain a good figure, and studying English very well.

So I am happy because of my great future.
>> So, I am happy because I know I will have a great future.
~~ Thank you very much! Good night! >_<