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1. turn down
For me, turning down something or someone is too difficult. But my friend is good at turning down. When turning down, we don’t have to consider how he or she feel. We just should focus on ourselves. Practically, it is important to turn down adequately.
2. best approach
All of works have each best approaches. So it is important to seek best approach when you start something. Im curious about best approach when it comes to studying English
3. persuasive
You know, someone persuasive is popular in the company. I also try to be persuasive. And when i talk to someone, i try to have a conversation persuasively.
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1. turn down>> CORRECT
For me, turning down something or someone is too difficult. But my friend is good at turning down.
For me, turning down something or someone is too difficult. But my friend is good at turning down.
>> For me, turning down something or someone is too difficult, but my friend is good at it.
When turning down, we don’t have to consider how he or she feel.
>> When turning down an offer, we don’t have to consider how he or she feels.
OR When turning down an offer, showing empathy is unnecessary.
We just should focus on ourselves.
>> We should just focus on ourselves.
Practically, it is important to turn down adequately.
>> CORRECT
2. best approach
>> CORRECT
2. best approach
>> CORRECT
All of works have each best approaches. So it is important to seek best approach when you start something.
All of works have each best approaches. So it is important to seek best approach when you start something.
>> All kinds of work have their best approaches, so it is important to seek best approaches when you start something.
Im curious about best approach when it comes to studying English
>> I\'m curious about the best approach when it comes to studying English.
3. persuasive
>> I\'m curious about the best approach when it comes to studying English.
3. persuasive
>> CORRECT
You know, someone persuasive is popular in the company.
You know, someone persuasive is popular in the company.
>> In reality, a persuasive person is popular in a company.
I also try to be persuasive. And when i talk to someone, i try to have a conversation persuasively.
>> I also try to be persuasive, and when I talk to someone, I try to have a conversation persuasively.
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