Worht dishes
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The most expensive dish was I ate at shanghai IFC mall restaurant with my family.
We were starving and hungry and our leg is pain. So, we want entry somewhere restaurant.
It’s not important to the menu. We were just want to rest in the restaurant.
That restaurant was high floor and view is awesome and the interior was fancy. It’s was not our plan.
I felt something is wrong but, we can’t go out because we are already drinking water.
We ordered some side dishes and cheap main dishes for our family 4 people.
And we have to paid almost 500 dollars, it was a shock to our family. I have never eaten 500 dollars.
I don’t remember what is dishes, I only remember how much is it.
Sometimes our family talked about these memories, it was a shock but this episode was interesting happening for our family.
So, I think these dishes were worth it to me. I thought we bought good funny memories for 500 dollars.
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Good afternoon [이름]!
Gracious goodness! That was pretty fancy!
At least you were able to try a fancy kind of restaurant. :)
The most expensive dish was I ate at shanghai IFC mall restaurant with my family.
>>> The most expensive food I ate was at the IFC Mall restaurant in Shanghai with my family.
We were starving and hungry and our leg is pain.
>>> We were starving and legs were in pain.
So, we want entry somewhere restaurant.
>>> So we went to any restaurant.
It’s not important to the menu.
>>> The menu was not important.
We were just want to rest in the restaurant.
>>> We just wanted to rest in the restaurant.
That restaurant was high floor and view is awesome and the interior was fancy.
>>> The restaurant has a high floor and a nice view and interior.
It’s was not our plan.
>>> CORRECT!
I felt something is wrong but, we can’t go out because we are already drinking water.
>>> I felt something was wrong, but we can\'t go out because we\'re already drinking water.
We ordered some side dishes and cheap main dishes for our family 4 people.
>>> We ordered side dishes and cheap main dishes for 4 family members.
And we have to paid almost 500 dollars, it was a shock to our family.
>>> And we paid 500 dollars and my family were pretty shock.
I have never eaten 500 dollars.
>>> I have never had a 500 dollar food before before.
I don’t remember what is dishes, I only remember how much is it.
>>> I don\'t remember what were the dishes, I can only remember how much was it.
Sometimes our family talked about these memories, it was a shock but this episode was interesting happening for our family.
>>> Sometimes my family talk about these memories and it was shocking, but this episode was fun for my family.
So, I think these dishes were worth it to me.
>>>So, I think those dishes were worth it.
I thought we bought good funny memories for 500 dollars.
>>> CORRECT!
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