work abroad
학생이 쓴 원문
When we leave one\'s country, we need big courage and several abilities.
If I have chance to work abroad, first of all I consider my language ability to live there.
I am confident an adaptation whatever I go any country.
Besides I don\'t have any useful arts, so before I leave here I will learn useful arts skill .
Before the time, I have wanted to work in Japan.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
Working outside one\'s country is really challenging. There are many factors that a person has to consider to become successul in a froeign land.
Thank you for sharing today.
Aki~
When we leave one\'s country, we need big courage and several abilities.
>>> When we leave our country, we need a lot of courage and several abilities.
If I have chance to work abroad, first of all I consider my language ability to live there.
>>> If I have the chance to work abroad, first of all, I consider my language ability to live there.
I am confident an adaptation whatever I go any country.
>>> I am confident that I can adapt to any country.
Besides I don\'t have any useful arts, so before I leave here I will learn useful arts skill .
>>> Besides, I don\'t have any useful arts, so before I leave here, I will learn useful arts skills.
Before the time, I have wanted to work in Japan.
>>> Before that time, I wanted to work in Japan.
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