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Money is really important in Korea. The reason why I study and choose a job is that I want to make good money. There is also a saying about money. It is happier to cry on a limousine than to cry on a bike.
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Money is really important in Korea.
>>CORRECT!
The reason why I study and choose a job is that I want to make good money.
>>The reason why I study and choose a job is because I want to make good money.
There is also a saying about money.
>>There is also a saying about money.
OR: There is also a proverb about money.
It is happier to cry on a limousine than to cry on a bike.
>>It\'s happier crying in a limousine than on a bike.
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