Work-life balance

Hello sir,

It\'s another Monday. Are you one of those people who have Monday blues? Anyway sir, your sentences in this composition are mostly correct. Congratulations! See you later!

Take take!

~T. Lynn

We have two choices. To live to work or not to work to live, that is a question.

>>correct!

Many people say they work to live.

>>correct!

But work has the nature of work.

>>correct grammar! (but what do you mean sir?)

That continues to make a work. And so the work makes a workaholic.

>>We continuously work so that makes us  workaholic.

In our society, many people seems to be a workaholic.

>>In our society, many people seem to be workaholics.

Workaholism is tend to neglect of his family.

>>Workaholics tend to neglect their families.

That would destroy the balance of work and life.

>>correct!

This is a one of the important reason why the diveoce rate is high.

>>This is one of the main reason why the divorce rate is high.

Actually it\'s not easy to balance a good work-life.

>>correct!

The higher person is tend to be a workaholic and to break a good work-life balance.

>>The higher person tends to be workaholic and break a good work- life balance.

 I think It\'s the result that caused by human greed and their competition and expanding of his ranges.

>>I think it\'s the result of  human greed, competition and expanding of position.

The world is not fair. If people will balance a good work-life, the world will be a little more fair.

>>correct!

And divorce rate will go down. I think.

>>correct!