Working multiple jobs
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Working multiple jobs can be increasing income, providing various job experiences, and build diverse job career. However, it has a risk of severe fatigue or burnout due to overwork and leads to breaking work and life balance.
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Hello, Gi [이름]!
I agree! Actually, in my country, people who really need money are the ones working multiple jobs, and some of them go to other countries like America because working multiple jobs there is quite normal. But in Korea, I heard that some just want experience, or if not, they want a part-time job so they can earn money, travel, and then work again once they return. It’s more for flexibility and freedom.
- T. Caitlyn
Working multiple jobs can be increasing income, providing various job experiences, and build diverse job career.
>> Working multiple jobs can increase income, provide various job experiences, and build a diverse career.
However, it has a risk of severe fatigue or burnout due to overwork and leads to breaking work and life balance.
>> However, it carries a risk of severe fatigue or burnout due to overwork and can lead to a disruption of work-life balance.
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