Working out has a lot of benefits for good health. Should the government make it mandatory for peopl
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As \"working and life balance\" is being a part of culture and most of people\'s desire, a lot of people are knowledgeable and interested in making their lives more valuable rather t[이름] earning more money. Knowledge about benefits of having working out is an affect of this kind of desire. As time goes by, more and more people enjoy various sports to have healty lives.
So should the government make it mandatory for people to work out because of benefits and people\'s konwledge improve about it?
In my opinion, rather the government make itself mandatory, raise people\'s awareness about their health and create the environment to enjoy work out is important, like make \'working 52hours a week\' policy in Korea.
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Hello Jessie! T[이름]k you for this. I agree with you. People should not be forced to exercise, but rather be motivated.
- T. Beth
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As \"working and life balance\" is being a part of culture and most of people\'s desire, a lot of people are knowledgeable and interested in making their lives more valuable rather t[이름] earning more money. >>> OR: As \"work and life balance\" is becoming a part of culture and most of people\'s desire, a lot of people are knowledgeable and interested in making their lives more valuable rather t[이름] earning more money.
Knowledge about benefits of having working out is an affect of this kind of desire.
>>> Knowledge about the benefits of working out is an effect of this kind of desire.
As time goes by, more and more people enjoy various sports to have healty lives.
>>> As time goes by, more and more people enjoy various sports to have healthy lives.
>>> As time goes by, more and more people enjoy various sports to have healthy lives.
So should the government make it mandatory for people to work out because of benefits and people\'s konwledge improve about it?
>>> So should the government make it mandatory for people to work out because of benefits and people\'s knowledge improve about it?
In my opinion, rather the government make itself mandatory, raise people\'s awareness about their health and create the environment to enjoy work out is important, like make \'working 52hours a week\' policy in Korea.
>>> In my opinion, rather t[이름] the government making it mandatory, raising people\'s awareness about their health and creating the environment to enjoy work out is important, like making the \'52 hours of work a week\' policy in Korea.
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