Working with people who annoy me

2020-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

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It\'s too hard working with people who annoy me! First of all, I don\'t want to get angry at whoever. And I don\'t want to talk with bad word. So I send them home. we take time about it each other and talk again nextday.

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Good afternoon, [이름]! It\'s nice to know your thoughts about your homework question and you did a good job sharing it through writing, Keep it up!^_^

It\'s too hard working with people who annoy me!
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>> It\'s very difficult working with people who annoy me.
First of all, I don\'t want to get angry at whoever.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>First of all, I don\'t want getting angry to anyone.
And I don\'t want to talk with bad word. So I send them home.
>>>And I don\'t want to talk bad words, so I send them home.
we take time about it each other and talk again nextday.
>>> We take some time apart from each other and talk again the next day.

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