workplace
학생이 쓴 원문
I feel thankful that my workplace is very safe and welfare facilities including library, health room and garden and so on.
Above all, I like having the principal\'s office where I can read, study and meet several people.
I am satisfied I can listen to music.
강사 첨삭
Great morning, Ms. [이름]
I am glad to hear those things about your workplace. Thank you for sharing this!
See you in class!
~Aki
I feel thankful that my workplace is very safe and welfare facilities including library, health room and garden and so on.
>>> I feel thankful that my workplace is very safe and has welfare facilities including a library, health room and garden, and so on.
Above all, I like having the principal\'s office where I can read, study and meet several people.
>>> CORRECT!
I am satisfied I can listen to music.
>>> CORRECT!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.