World record
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In London of the north in one of the villege, there was an old woman who lives with her two rabbits.
The rabbit is really big and tall.
His hight was almost as same as my sister!!
I t is really amazing.
This rabbit also got a World record named The biggest rabit in the world.
The rabbit was also bigger and taller than his mom.
The amazing thing is that he is still growing.
I hope I could tuch and feel his fur.
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In London of the north in one of the villege, there was an old woman who lives with her two rabbits.
>>>In the old villages in the north of London, there was an old woman who lived with her two rabbits.The rabbit is really big and tall.
>>>The rabbits are really big and tall.His hight was almost as same as my sister!!
>>>The height was almost the same as my sister!!I t is really amazing.
>>>It is really amazing.This rabbit also got a World record named The biggest rabit in the world.
>>>This rabbit also got a World record named 'The biggest rabbit in the world.'The rabbit was also bigger and taller than his mom.
>>>CorrectThe amazing thing is that he is still growing.
>>>CorrectI hope I could tuch and feel his fur.
>>>I hope I could touch and feel its' fur.
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