world will change to right way. (the last sentence).
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Teacher Dee! This is [Name]! I\'m 23.
Before covid-19 get worse, I started power english with teacher Avery.
When I heard that she needed to go hometown due to covid-19, I was sorry and I thought that covid-19 start to spread everywhere.
So please take care of yourself. I either take care myself. I stay at home all day.
I want to grow grammar and writing skill. So I was writing something and being check by Avery.
Last subject is \"What are some ways you feel you can make a difference in this world?\".
More than anything else, I think we need a sense of master.
For example, Let\'s think I\'m owner of one cafe. I prepare suitable tables and chairs and I make americano, capuchino, or dalgona coffee(This is trend coffee in Korea). I also clean my cafe and in front of my cafe. Last, maybe I will think that how can I marketing ?
What I want to say is, \"If I become an owner, my actions and my mindset will be different.\"
I think that if all people in this world have that kind of mind, world w
강사 첨삭
Hello Cathy! I am very glad to meet you. I am also concerned about the virus outbreak. It is really scary. I hope that everything will go back to normal soon. About your writing, I think that it\'s a good strategy to better skills. Keep it up! ~~T.Dee
>>Before COVID-19 got worse, I started at Power English with Teacher Avery.
When I heard that she needed to go hometown due to covid-19, I was sorry and I thought that covid-19 start to spread everywhere.
>>When I heard that she needed to go to her hometown due to the outbreak, I felt sorry and I thought that COVID-19 has started to spread everywhere.
So please take care of yourself. I either take care myself.
So please take care of yourself. I either take care myself.
>>So please take care of yourself. I am also taking care of myself.
I stay at home all day.
>>CORRECT!
I want to grow grammar and writing skill. So I was writing something and being check by Avery.
I want to grow grammar and writing skill. So I was writing something and being check by Avery.
>>I want to improve my grammar and writing skills. So I always write something and it is checked by Avery.
Last subject is \"What are some ways you feel you can make a difference in this world?\".
Last subject is \"What are some ways you feel you can make a difference in this world?\".
>>Our last topic was \"What are some ways you feel you can make a difference in this world?\"
More than anything else, I think we need a sense of master.
More than anything else, I think we need a sense of master.
>>More than anything else, I think we need a sense of mastery.
For example, Let\'s think I\'m owner of one cafe. I prepare suitable tables and chairs and I make americano, capuchino, or dalgona coffee(This is trend coffee in Korea).
For example, Let\'s think I\'m owner of one cafe. I prepare suitable tables and chairs and I make americano, capuchino, or dalgona coffee(This is trend coffee in Korea).
>>For example, let\'s think that I\'m an owner of a cafe. I prepare suitable tables and chairs and I make Americano, cappuccino, or dalgona coffee (This is types coffee blends in Korea).
I also clean my cafe and in front of my cafe. Last, maybe I will think that how can I marketing?
>>I also clean my cafe and the front of my cafe. Lastly, maybe I will think about my marketing strategy.
What I want to say is, \"If I become an owner, my actions and my mindset will be different.\"
What I want to say is, \"If I become an owner, my actions and my mindset will be different.\"
>>CORRECT!
I think that if all people in this world have that kind of mind, world world will change to right way.
I think that if all people in this world have that kind of mind, world world will change to right way.
>>I think that if all people in this world have that kind of mindset, the world will change in right way.
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