Worst experience about money.

2014-05-19 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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When I was about 22, I had lost my wallet. At the time I didn't remember as I was dead drunk. So I had lost my wallet which was expensive thing, cash and gift tickets. And when I was brushing my tooth at my office, I had been stolen my bag! At the thought of It was horrible. So I'm trying no to lost mine since then.

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Hi there [이름]^^   Your experience is quite interesting. I hope that it won\'t happen to you again. I wonder what you did after you lost your wallet and your bag?  I hope you reported it and whoever got it must be very ashamed of doing so. You must be very careful with valuable things that you own.   Be careful of plurals [tooth-teeth] Practice with verb tenses to.   Take care^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you today:   When I was about 22, I had lost my wallet. >> CORRECT OR> I\'ve tried losing a wallet when I was 22.At the time I didn\'t remember as I was dead drunk. >> CORRECT OR> I was so drunk that time because I was very drunk.So I had lost my wallet which was expensive thing, cash and gift tickets. >> So I lost my wallet which was an expensive thing,with cash and gift tickets.And when I was brushing my tooth at my office, I had been stolen my bag! >> And when I was brushing my teeth at my office, I had my bag stolen!he thought of It was horrible. >> CORRECT OR> It was horrible just by thinking about it.So I\'m trying no to lost mine since then. >> So I\'m trying not to lost mine since then.

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