Worst experience about money.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was about 22, I had lost my wallet.
At the time I didn't remember as I was dead drunk.
So I had lost my wallet which was expensive thing, cash and gift tickets.
And when I was brushing my tooth at my office, I had been stolen my bag!
At the thought of It was horrible.
So I'm trying no to lost mine since then.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]^^
Your experience is quite interesting.
I hope that it won\'t happen to you again.
I wonder what you did after you lost your wallet and your bag? I hope you
reported it and whoever got it must be very ashamed of doing so.
You must be very careful with valuable things that you own.
Be careful of plurals [tooth-teeth]
Practice with verb tenses to.
Take care^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
When I was about 22, I had lost my wallet.
>> CORRECT
OR> I\'ve tried losing a wallet when I was 22.At the time I didn\'t remember as I was dead drunk.
>> CORRECT
OR> I was so drunk that time because I was very drunk.So I had lost my wallet which was expensive thing, cash and gift tickets.
>> So I lost my wallet which was an expensive thing,with cash and gift tickets.And when I was brushing my tooth at my office, I had been stolen my bag!
>> And when I was brushing my teeth at my office, I had my bag stolen!he thought of It was horrible.
>> CORRECT
OR> It was horrible just by thinking about it.So I\'m trying no to lost mine since then.
>> So I\'m trying not to lost mine since then.
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