Worst invention
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the worst invention of the world is nuclear bomb.
Nuclear can be useful to make electricity, but it’s too dangerous.
That’s why many people oppose when the nuclear power plant has been building.
At work we are trying to get patents for a new cosmetic package.
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Hi [이름]ny!
I agree with you on this point.
You have explained it very well.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think the worst invention of the world is nuclear bomb.
>> I think the worst invention in the world is the nuclear bomb.
Nuclear can be useful to make electricity, but it’s too dangerous.
Nuclear can be useful to make electricity, but it’s too dangerous.
>> Nuclear technology can be useful to make electricity, but it’s too dangerous.
That’s why many people oppose when the nuclear power plant has been building.
That’s why many people oppose when the nuclear power plant has been building.
>> That’s why many people oppose when a nuclear power plant is being built.
At work we are trying to get patents for a new cosmetic package.
At work we are trying to get patents for a new cosmetic package.
>> At work, we try to get patents for a new cosmetic package.
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