Worst Natural Disaster
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Theme: [ESSAY] What do you think is the worst natural disaster? Why?
I think it is the Tsunami.
Because in Korea, there is a movie named .
Haeundae is Korea\'s beach. Then, why is the movie named ?
Movie is about natural disaster, Tsunami.
I saw it\'s preview, and I was so scared.
So, I think the worst natural disaster is Tsunami!
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Theme: [ESSAY] What do you think is the worst natural disaster? Why?
I think it is the Tsunami. Because in Korea, there is a movie named .
>> or: I may not have experienced it personally but I\'d say it\'s the tsunami because there is a Korean movie named after it.
Haeundae is Korea\'s beach. Then, why is the movie named ?
>> Haeundae is a beach in Korea. Then, why is the movie named ___?
Movie is about natural disaster, Tsunami.
>> The movie is about the natural disaster, tsunami.
I saw it\'s preview, and I was so scared.
>> I saw its trailer, and I was so scared.
So, I think the worst natural disaster is Tsunami!
>> Thus, I think the worst natural disaster is the tsunami!
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