Worst restaurant
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It\'s too hard to remind the worst restaurant. Because I think I have not been to a bad restaurant. But, I remember one thing.
It\'s not a story about service and food of restaurant. A few weeks ago, I went to a pork ribs buffet with my friends.
We ate a lot of pork ,rice and salad. Also, we drank lots of coke. That was a problem. I drank coke more than usual. So my stomach was filled of gas. When I move, my stomach hurt. Tha was the my worst experience at a restaurant.
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Hi there, [이름] U!
Oh no! That was indeed a bad experience! :3
Oh no! That was indeed a bad experience! :3
Anyways, thanks for answering your homework! :D
See you later~
-T.Jhozel
1. It\'s too hard to remind the worst restaurant. Because I think I have not been to a bad restaurant.
>> It\'s too difficult to recall the worst restaurant. Because I have never been to a bad restaurant.
But, I remember one thing.
>> Correct!
It\'s not a story about service and food of restaurant.
>> It\'s not a story about the restaurant\'s service or food.
A few weeks ago, I went to a pork ribs buffet with my friends.
>>Correct!
>>OR: I went to a pork ribs buffet with my friends a few weeks ago.
We ate a lot of pork ,rice and salad. Also, we drank lots of coke.
>> We ate a lot of pork, rice, and salad and we also drank a lot of coke.
That was a problem. I drank coke more than usual.
>> That was a problem. I drank more coke than usual.
So my stomach was filled of gas. When I move, my stomach hurt.
>> So my stomach was full of gas. My stomach ached every time I moved.
Tha was the my worst experience at a restaurant.
>> That was my worst restaurant experience.
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