Worst weather is rainning.

2023-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Worst weather is rainning . Because it can\'t go outside. It\'s very many cloud. I don\'t like rainning weather. I very like sunny day. I very nice but rainning day in very not good.

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            Write about the worst weather you experienced in your life.


Worst weather is rainning . Because it can\'t go outside.
>> The worst weather I\'ve experienced is rainy because I can\'t go outside on that day. 

 It\'s very many cloud.
>> It\'s also very cloudy. 

I don\'t like rainning weather.
>> I don\'t like rainy weather. 

I very like sunny day.
>> I really love sunny days. 

I very nice but rainning day in very not good.
>> Sunny days are nice, rainy days aren\'t good. 

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