Worst weather: too hot weather
학생이 쓴 원문
The worst weather that I\'ve ever experienced was hottest and wettest weather. The degree was 38*c-40*c. At that time I can\'t pay attention to anything and can\'t study. It annoyed me. All over my body, red dot because of sweat happened. It made me very itch. Because of these dot, I had to take shower about three to four times a day! So, this weather is the worst weather in my memory.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Daniel! You answered
the question appropriately and delivered your ideas in an orderly way. Very good!
Please take note of the ff:
1. Observe proper word usage.
2. Be careful with verb tenses.
-Teacher Debbie
>> The worst weather that I\'ve ever experienced was the hottest and the wettest weather.
The degree was 38*c-40*c.
>> The temperature was 38°C - 40°C.
At that time I can\'t pay attention to anything and can\'t study.
>> At that time, I couldn\'t pay attention to anything and couldn\'t study.
It annoyed me.
>> This is a good sentence.
All over my body, red dot because of sweat happened.
>> There were red dots all over my body because of the sweat.
It made me very itch.
>> They made me itch.
Because of these dot, I had to take shower about three to four times a day!
>> Because of these dots, I had to take a shower about three to four times a day!
So, this weather is the worst weather in my memory.
>> Therefore, this is the worst weather in my memory.
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