Would it be a big problem for you if your cell phone was lost or stolen? Why or why not?
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Obviously, it would be a big problem if I lost phone.
Because, I proceed many tasks through a smart phone.
I can\'t remember any telephone number without phone.
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Obviously, it would be a big problem if I lost phone.
>> Obviously, it would be a big problem if I lost my phone.
Because, I proceed many tasks through a smart phone.
Because, I proceed many tasks through a smart phone.
>> It\'s because many of my tasks are done through my phone.
I can\'t remember any telephone number without phone.
I can\'t remember any telephone number without phone.
>> I can\'t remember any telephone numbers without my phone.
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