Would it be okay with a white lie?
학생이 쓴 원문
We would face unpleasant situations quite often if we can only tell a truth in our daily lives.
As all people know it, most of lies are sweet but truths leave bitter taste in many cases.
Thus, we do not speak directly a truth to someone to keep good relationships or avoid picky issues.
Plus, there are a lot of people those who want to listen to lies and flattery even if we have to teach
our children that lying is bad, even white lies.
There are pros and cons to this question.
So, I have no choice but to agree with white lies are okay as a sales manager but I disagree with this as a father.
강사 첨삭
Hi YJ!
Good to hear from you again!
I can see that you were so careful in constructing your sentences and organizing your thoughts together.
Here are my corrections.
We would face unpleasant situations quite often if we can only tell a truth in our daily lives.
>> We would face unpleasant situations quite often if we can only tell the truth in our daily lives.
As all people know it, most of lies are sweet but truths leave bitter taste in many cases.
>> As all people know it, most of the lies are sweet, but truths leave bitter taste in many cases.
Thus, we do not speak directly a truth to someone to keep good relationships or avoid picky issues.
>> Thus, we do not speak directly the truth to someone to keep good relationships or to avoid picky issues.
Plus, there are a lot of people those who want to listen to lies and flattery even if we have to teach our children that lying is bad, even white lies.
>> Plus, there are a lot of people who want to listen to lies and flattery words even if we teach our children that lying is bad, even white lies.
There are pros and cons to this question.
>> There are pros and cons of this question.
So, I have no choice but to agree with white lies are okay as a sales manager but I disagree with this as a father.
>> So, I have no choice but to agree that white lies are okay as a sales manager but I disagree with this as a father.
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