Would rather be very intelligent or very good-looking?
학생이 쓴 원문
I'd rather be intelligent than good-looking.
Because being good looking have depreciation.
We are getting old and also our looking is getting old.
But being intelligent have increasable value.
That's why i think being intelligent is better that being good-looking.
강사 첨삭
I\'d rather be intelligent than good-looking.
>>CORRECT
Because being good looking have depreciation.
>>CORRECT
We are getting old and also our looking is getting old.
>>We are getting old and also our looks are getting old.
But being intelligent have increasable value.
>>CORRECT
That\'s why i think being intelligent is better that being good-looking.
>> That\'s why I think being intelligent is better that being good-looking.
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