Would u check these sentences, teacher?

You should enroll in academies such as next English. I recommend you the teacher called Hannah. She is highly experienced so that you can be satisfied with her reaching. First, you should reserve a hall to hold a celebration party. Why don’t you call NEXT hotel? They have many gorgeous banquet halls. And foods are delicious. I am confident everyone would admit it. Actually, our department will have a meeting on (budget / human resource) next week. I will bring this issue to the meeting and do my best to solve this problem. I will bring this issue to the board meeting next week. And I will insist that / I will stress that the finance department needs more budget. I will call you as soon as the results are made. I will talk this (problem / issue) with Jason, (the president / my boss / the mayor) I am confident we can come up with the right decision. I will call you as soon as the results are made. We can postpone your membership for one year without additional charge.

Hi there!

You did a very good job with this composition.

Try to check again your errors and compare them with your sentences.

Again Good job!

Have a good one.^^

~t.Hannah^^

You should enroll in academies such as next English.

>> You should enroll in academies such as Next English.

 I recommend you the teacher called Hannah.

>> I recommend you teacher Hannah.

She is highly experienced so that you can be satisfied with her reaching.

>> She is highly experienced that is why you can be satisfied with her teaching.
First, you should reserve a hall to hold a celebration party.

>> First, you should reserve a hall for the celebration.

Why don’t you call NEXT hotel?

>> Correct^^

They have many gorgeous banquet halls.

>> Correct^^

And foods are delicious.

>> Their foods are delicious too.

I am confident everyone would admit it.

>> I am confident that everyone will like it.
Actually, our department will have a meeting on (budget / human resource) next week.

>> Actually, our department will have a meeting about budget and human resources next week.

 I will bring this issue to the meeting and do my best to solve this problem.

>> I will raise this issue during the meeting and do my best as well to solve this problem.
I will bring this issue to the board meeting next week.

>> Correct^^

And I will insist that / I will stress that the finance department needs more budget.

>> Correct^^
I will call you as soon as the results are made.

>> I will call you as soon as the results are available.
I will talk this (problem / issue) with Jason, (the president / my boss / the mayor) I am confident we can come up with the right decision.

>> I will talk about this problem with Jason who is my boss and the president. I am confident that we can come up with the right decision.

 I will call you as soon as the results are made.

>> I will call you as soon as the results come out.
We can postpone your membership for one year without additional charge.

>> Correct^^