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Q: What is the advantage of advertising on the internet? Compared to the cost, it is very effective. I don’t have to issue a lot of flyers. I don’t have to spend tons of papers and inks. So I can save my budged. Furthermore, so many people will notice the advertisement easily on the internet. Q: How many do you access on the internet? Every day, I access the internet too many times. I usually send an e-mail to my friends or search information on the web. Especially, I use face book. With this, I can hang out with my friends without a meeting in person. With my smart phone, I can do many things such as accessing the internet, sending an e mail, talking with my friends, and searching information With my smart phone, I can access the internet whenever I want. With my smart phone, I can read a digital book whenever I want.

Hello there [이름]!^____^ How\'s everything going?^^ I have a few corrections below. Check them ou! See you soon! ~t. Hannah~ Q: What is the advantage of advertising on the internet?Compared to the cost, it is very effective. >>Correct! I don’t have to issue a lot of flyers. >>I don\'t have to give a lot of flyers to people.  I don’t have to spend tons of papers and inks. >>Correct!  So I can save my budged. >>So I can save money and budget better.  Furthermore, so many people will notice the advertisement easily on the internet. >>Correct!Q: How many do you access on the internet?Every day, I access the internet too many times. >>Correct! I usually send an e-mail to my friends or search information on the web. >>Correct!Especially, I use face book. >>Correct! With this, I can hang out with my friends without a meeting in person. >>With this, I can actually communicate with my friends without meeting them in person.With my smart phone, I can do many things such as accessing the internet, sending an e mail, talking with my friends, and searching information>>Correct!With my smart phone, I can access the internet whenever I want. >>Correct!With my smart phone, I can read a digital book whenever I want. >>Correct!