Would u check these sentences, teacher?
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Q: Do you prefer to buy something online?
There are some advantages using on line shopping malls.
It is very convenient. If I use online malls, I don’t have to go to a store in person. So I can save my trouble.
Also, it is usually cheaper than a department store.
And its delivery is so fast. After I order products, I can get my order in just two days.
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Hi [이름]!~ ~
Check them out again for me.kk^^
Take care now!
~t. Hannah~
Q: Do you prefer to buy something online?There are some advantages using on line shopping malls.>>Correct!
It is very convenient.
>>Correct!
If I use online malls, I don’t have to go to a store in person.
>>If I use online buying, I don\'t need to meet the seller in person.
So I can save my trouble.
>>So I can save my travel fees.Also, it is usually cheaper than a department store.
>>Correct!And its delivery is so fast.
>>Correct!
After I order products, I can get my order in just two days. >>Correct!
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