Would you be interested in taking a cooking class?

2020-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

If my cooking skills more advancer, I\'ll take the class. But I don\'t have enough time to take cooking classes. Of course it\'s because I\'m not interested in cooking. There are many TV programs about cooking. It helps me a little bit. A few days later, when I\'m interested in cooking, and I have enough time, I\'d like to take a cooking class.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this. Cooking might be something you would get interested in in the future, who knows?
- T. Beth
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If my cooking skills more advancer, I\'ll take the class.
>>> 
If my cooking skills advance more, I\'ll take the class.   
But I don\'t have enough time to take cooking classes.
>>> correct   
Of course it\'s because I\'m not interested in cooking.
>>>  correct  
There are many TV programs about cooking.
>>> correct   
It helps me a little bit.
>>> correct   
A few days later, when I\'m interested in cooking, and I have enough time, I\'d like to take a cooking class.
>>>  OR: In the future, when I\'m interested in cooking and I have enough time, I\'d like to take a cooking class.  

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